First time writing for this community. Love a more directional prompt that not only includes a picture, but the first line. Link to this blog here
“Arriving at the beach, she reflected on her life”
It seemed like everything had come in waves: a splish of bad here, a splash of good there, and an occasional breeze that swept the branch’s melancholy shade away for a swash of revitalizing sunlight.
*Splish*
She felt the drizzle of salty tears from when her dad passed away.
*Splash*
The spray from squirt guns and water hoses used as watery artillery at her best friend’s birthday party.
Every time the mourning shadows tried to engulf her in gloom, a breath of fresh air placed her back in the sunshine.
Changing tides and winds can bring in anguish or elation, but nothing stays the same: a bittersweet morsel for those currently on either side. Just remember, the pendulum swings both ways; it will come back.
This was a good take on the image, so well done.
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Thank you! You are too kind!
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Well crafted Jorbi! I am happy that you found the Mondays Finish the Story challenge and hope that you continue to write for the site. We have been having loads of fun with this since it began in October. See you next week? I hope so! Be well… ^..^
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Oh yes, I will be doing this again. Thank you for the warm welcome!
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I look forward to what you come up with! 🙂
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This was vey well written. Nice job.
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Thank you very much!
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A great piece of sparkle Jorbi ~ I enjoyed your waves of splish – splash ~ Well done! 🙂
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Thank you very much! I’ve had the habit of adding sound effects to my writing recently….
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A nice thought for a Monday….A hopeful message in this piece.
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Indeed, or a menacing one….
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A story with a moral. Very poetic. Love the writing. Splish, splash, and an occasional breeze. Nice!
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Thank you! Splish and Splash are very fun words.
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Beautifully done… love the contrast of splish and splash!
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Thank you! My auto-correct didn’t like the word “splish”, so I’m glad you do!
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Love the imagery in this one, great work!
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I enjoyed reading this as it reminded me of “there’s a rainbow with every storm, or the light at the end of the tunnel”… those feel good words. I really liked this!
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Thank you! There is a definite theme of “differences”.
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Yes, there is – sort of a “universal balance” to all things.
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Good story with great description, Jorbi. It’s really hopeful at the end. Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you very much! I’m surprised how many optimists there are!
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