FFfAW – Boneyard Bustle

 

© Sonya O.
© Sonya O.

Buried beneath a boneyard of battered tombstones lies hordes of insomniacs that clatter through their stretched coracles.  Open eyes and empty mouths remain ingrained to their one-manned vessel while they should be traveling the tributary to hereafter, but inhumane mock mourners fancied Charon’s obol too overpriced to inhume.

I can still hear the hum of hamstrung hopefuls: murmurs of eager souls.  Restlessness resumes even after a formal curtain call if relatives leave residue from roguish relationships unresolved: irresolution to vocalize merciful verbiage in a favorable vein.  Oblivious people speak a hostile vernacular comparable to Narcissus himself, at least until their retributive day.

Speak honestly.

Speak openly.

Few claim to be clairvoyant.


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17 thoughts on “FFfAW – Boneyard Bustle”

    1. Ha, no worries! It didn’t come off negative at all! Even if it did, it’s not a big deal. I wouldn’t get upset over negative comments, but I’ve seen you enough around WordPress to know better. Feel free to be as sarcastic as you want here (;

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  1. A very creative and dark use of the picture. In a way, this reminded me of Corpse Bride by Tim Burton/ Mike Johnson and the Underworld below the Land of the Living.

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      1. You are most welcome 🙂 I am fascinated by writing techniques and most don’t get used enough today, so when I see some fine writing like yours, well I celebrate 😀 Keep it up!

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