I see absolutely everything.
Soaring on the heights of wings.
Discerning which of the ants down there
Are supposed to be the queen and king.
I may be deemed ethereal,
But definitely not imperial.
That’s what they have over me-
Their things are material.
I wish I could give you all the world,
Necklaces, bracelets, rings all pearled.
I wanted to be there already,
But my plans have all unfurled.
Maybe it’s some fear of commitment,
I already want to be at fulfillment,
Too much to say with no one to read,
So I guess I’ll just have to film it.
I need shaken this unshakeable vice,
That I feel each gift must have a price,
Even when you say you don’t need it,
Some gifts sure do entice.
So my darling, and dear friend,
I promise to make it in the end.
You’ll have more than you’ll ever need,
Until then, love I send.
I loved It ❤
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Awesome poem Jorbi! I loved it!
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A very atmospheric piece and a unique take too.
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Thank you! I think rhyming adds a certain atmosphere to writing. I really hate the stigma that rhyming poems are childish, and that mature poetry is based on rhythm alone. I’m greatly inspired by music, like most, so I choose to emulate that. Sorry for the soapbox comment! 😀
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You’re welcome, and no need to apologise!
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Good job with the rhymes – I like it 🙂
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Nicely constructed. This is a very powerful poem Jorbi! Thank you for another excellent contribution to the Mondays Finish the Story challenge and be well… ^..^
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Exceptional. I admire poets and your unique mastery of words. This was powerful and I enjoyed the poem and its message!
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