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“What a tangled web we weave, when first we practice to deceive.”
Obfuscating freedom with obscurity,
Trickery,
Deceptively-
Leading others to misery,
Melancholy,
Gloomy.
Unhappy-
Spindly spindles of sticky,
Tacky,
Gluey,
Lies not of necessity,
And they will inevitably,
Unavoidably,
Certainly,
Unescapably,
Unsurprisingly,
Be the end of me.
This web stuck up in a tree,
Of family,
Captured are he, she,
Me.
We’re all undeniably,
Irrefutably,
Indubitably,
Trapped for all eternity,
In this world we see,
Where things are not as they seem to be.
Our brothers are not brotherly,
And sisters not sisterly.
We never knew if our mothers were motherly,
Or our fathers fatherly.
Our guardians are not parentally:
Neither paternally,
Or maternally.
Those genetically,
Heritably,
Natively,
Naturally,
Evil things are a monstrosity,
That left us be,
Because of such a high fee.
They didn’t care about our survivability,
Leaving us under a park tree,
When our guardians selflessly,
Saved you and me,
From our deceptively,
Gloomy,
Gluey,
“Family” tree.
I love this… hits close to the heart for me. A poet’s mind is a magical thing…
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Thank you! I don’t write poetry often, and I feel somewhat self-conscious about it, so your words mean a lot.
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Nicely done, and great use of words to express feeling. Thanks Jorbi for another contribution to the MFtS challenge. Be well… ^..^
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Very interesting and entertaining twist to the prompt. I couldn’t help but think you were speaking of my family tree. LOL 🙂
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Thanks! I think everyone’s family tree has some broken branches.
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Yes, that is true. Mine certainly has! LOL
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Loved the poem and how you weaved all the words with meaning throughout. Great job. 🙂
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Thank you! I don’t write poetry often, but rhyming a hard ‘E’ seemed like a good place to try. Haha!
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I write poetry all the time on All Poetry but I write free verse and haiku more often than rhyming verse.
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Great poem, Jorbi! I loved the natural flow of the words and of course the message behind them!
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